A good writer strives to be original. Too often papers that I evaluate are filled with cliches, overused expressions. Usually, students don't realize that they are even using cliches. So this writing exercise is designed to not only make you aware of what a cliche is, but to allow you to purge them from your system forever.
Choose one of the following opening lines to create a new scene in the novel and use at least 12 cliches in your paragraph.
You may want to google cliches to find lists from which you can choose.
Italicize each cliche or change the color so that it's easy for me to see how many you have used.
Scenario one: George looked up from shoeing the horse to see the outline of Curley's wife in the doorway of the barn. They were alone.
Scenario two: Slim and George sat down at the bar. Slim put a hand on George's shoulder and stated, "Like I said, George, sometimes a guy's gotta."
If you include dialogue (conversation), remember to indent and start a new paragraph withn each new speaker.
Scenario one: George looked up from shoeing the horse to see the outline of Curley's wife in the doorway of the barn. They were alone.
Scenario two: Slim and George sat down at the bar. Slim put a hand on George's shoulder and stated, "Like I said, George, sometimes a guy's gotta."
If you include dialogue (conversation), remember to indent and start a new paragraph withn each new speaker.
